Sunday 28 June 2015

SENTENCE CORRECTION

1  In the opening speech at an international telecommunications conference held in Lisbon, a leading cellular service provider claimed that(**** it had regained much of its recently weakened popularity with the implementation of innovative as well as aggressive marketing strategies.*****)

A. it had regained much of its recently weakened popularity with the implementation of innovative as well as aggressive marketing strategies
B. with the implementation of innovative and aggressive marketing strategies, it will regain much of its recently weakened popularity
C. it is regaining much of its recently weakened popularity with the implementation of innovative and aggressive marketing strategies
D. much of their recently weakened popularity had been regained by the implementation of innovative and aggressive marketing strategies
E. with the implementation of innovative and aggressive marketing strategies, it had regained much of its recently weakened popularity

2

The single-family house constructed by the Yana, a Native American people who lived in what is now
northern California, was conical in shape, its framework of poles overlaid with slabs of bark, either
cedar or pine, and (***banked with dirt to a height of****) three to four feet.

A. banked with dirt to a height of
B. banked with dirt as high as that of
C. banked them with dirt to a height of
D. was banked with dirt as high as
E. was banked with dirt as high as that of


3

A study of food resources in the North Pacific between 1989 and 1996 revealed (****that creatures of the seabed were suffering from dwindling food supplies, possibly resulting from increasing***) sea surface temperatures during the same period.

A) that creatures of the seabed were suffering from dwindling food supplies, possibly resulting from increasing 

B) that creatures of the seabed were suffering because food supplies were dwindling, possibly as a result of an increase in

C) that creatures of the seabed were suffering because of food supplies, which were dwindling possibly as a result of increasing

D) creatures of the seabed that were suffering from food supplies that were dwindling, possibly resulting from an increase in 

E) creatures of the seabed that were suffering because food supplies were dwindling, which possibly resulted from increasing


4

It is possible to hold a certain (****image in your mind for long periods, and this can have a salutary impact on****) your own behavior and character.

• image in your mind for long periods, and this can have a salutary impact on your own 
• image in your mind for long periods, and this can have a salutary impact on one's
• image in your mind for long periods, and this has a salutary impact on your
• image in your mind for a long period, and this can have a salutary impact on your 
• image in your mind for long periods, which has a salutary Impact on your


5


Any medical test will sometimes fail to detect(**** a condition when it is present and indicate that there is one*****) when it is not.


(A) a condition when it is present and indicate that there is one

(B) when a condition is present and indicate that there is one

(C) a condition when it is present and indicate that it is present

(D) when a condition is present and indicate its presence

(E) the presence of a condition when it is there and indicate its presence





















OA 

1 E

2 A

The question requires all the three descriptions of the object to be parallel 

A. banked with dirt to a height of
All options are parallel and there are no obvious errors 
B. banked with dirt as high as that of
as that of changes the meaning entirely
C. banked them with dirt to a height of
banked them is not parrallel and is also of wrong number (plural?)
D. was banked with dirt as high as
was banked is not parallel and as high as would be good it it was comparing to something. 
E. was banked with dirt as high as that of
Same as B

3

B

a) that creatures of the seabed were suffering from dwindling food supplies, possibly resulting from increasing - suffering from (a disease).WRONG. 

b) that creatures of the seabed were suffering because food supplies were dwindling, possibly as a result of an increase in - suffering because (of a reason) 

c) that creatures of the seabed were suffering because of food supplies, which were dwindling possibly as a result of increasing - changes the meaning. the creatures were suffering from a lack of food supplies. WRONG 

d) creatures of the seabed that were suffering from food supplies that were dwindling, possibly resulting from an increase in - need that. WRONG 

e) creatures of the seabed that were suffering because food supplies were dwindling, which possibly resulted from increasing - need that. WRONG


4
A/D

5

Any medical test will sometimes fail to detect a condition when it is present and indicate that there is one when it is not.

(A) a condition when it is present and indicate that there is one -"There is one" - not a proper usage 
(B) when a condition is present and indicate that there is one - fail to detect something - when is used to denote a time. fail to detect X when Y happened.
(C) a condition when it is present and indicate that it is present - Correct. it correctly and logically refers to condition.
(D) when a condition is present and indicate its presence - Same issue as point out in B)
(E) the presence of a condition when it is there and indicate its presence - fail to detect a condition and not presence of condition. Somehow I feel presence is redundant.

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